What do you guys think of this song so far? I'm very proud of it, IMO the best song I've written in this style to date. Any tips? I know the mixing sucks, I'm mixing on shitty Sony headphones. Let me know what you think. Vocals are very eh (improvised, just wanted to get an idea of what the melody would be like).

http://soundcloud.com/holdingtheinfinit ... hey-say-on

Couple volume inconsistencies, like the perceived increase in amplitude during the crash crash oriental instrument thing in the middle, but if it's just a demo then it doesn't even matter.

The song itself, I think you might be on to something...

Yeah I know the reason for that is because like in the verses there is only organ, bass, guitar, drums and vox, but in that part there is a mellotron, harpischord, and swell guitar added to that equation so i raised the volume for it to all match up.

And thanks, any criticism of it?