Flailing their arms in sheer agony, ungodly hail of molten magnesium mortar fire
Their flesh is seared at the flick of a switch as I sample the sweetest wine and finest attire

Also, if we did like, some retarded breakdowncore vocal highlight a la MVP by Despised Icon I have some more lyrics;



STEP BACK MOTHERFUCKER, I'M A FUCKING INVENTOR
BLOWIN' SHIT WAY THE FUCK UP FROM MY LUXURIOUS CONTROL CENTER
CHECK THE DIRIGIBLE, YEAH THAT SHIT'S MINE
MAD EPICUREAN UP IN THIS BITCH, ALL HATERS LEFT SUPINE

(I want to write one or two more little stanzas)

It would probably have to be added to the end with some sort of reverse cymbal effect or whatever to bring it down hard.
I am thinking we should tune retardedly low for this part, maybe Geoff could do something up real quick with his 7'er drop tuned from Bb standard to drop Ab.

Hehe, that would be lulz. I think Metal Fanatic has been in control of the instruments up in this piece. Maybe if I modified the drum track to include something like this he can add some limp wrist crabdaon riffs for you to bark over.

As retarded and simple as the riffs are you still know that shit's fun.

Can't say I do... I've never played it. It is similar in concept to a lot of slam stuff though, ie deconstructing your guitar playing to mere low rhythmic chugging, which I can say is hella fun... But that's more like doing that for an entire song at several tempos, not playing a bunch of riffers and then just going CHUG CHUG. CHUG CHUG. CHUG CHUG. Similar but different. Myeess.

Just straight up retardbreakcore is no fun for no one, but DI does it as tastefully as can be done, IMO.
Of course, the end of MVP is easily their most indulgent in terms of "FUCK IT, THE SCENE KIDS ARE GONNA LOVE THIS SHIT".

Otherwise, those dudes have some of the sweetest riffs in metal as far as I am concerned.

I like the lyrical direction this is going in.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8290798/banthammer%20v1.5.mp3

Write lyrics, place vocals. Fuckers.

This track is becoming rather sick

Gracias. Now if people would just record some vocals and send them to me it could be even more sick.

Yargh, soon I will have my mic back.
Till then, lyrics..
I will try to get some written down today.

So are there lyrics?

I still suggest a forum member tackles a specific section of the song, thus making it a big old gang band of sorts.

There are chunks of lyrics.
They are certainly not unified or anything, but there are pieces.
I am going to try to write some up.

And I am fully with you on the gang bang dealie, I wanna hear what everyone on here can do.

....

<_<

>_>

This shit needs to happen. Don't know how I'm just now stumbling onto it.

Some power metal vox would be epic for this track mister Hiryuu.

I would gladly contribute. So long as someone else writes the lyrics for me, as that is my primary songwriting handicap.

I am doing up the lyrics for this right now.
Should be done pretty soon, I'm kind of dedicating my next few hours to it.

Lyrics are done.

Vocalists: Cameron, Geoff, Eric, Curtis, Ben

[Cameron]
Flailing their arms in sheer agony, ungodly hail of molten magnesium mortar fire
Their flesh is seared at the flick of a switch as I sample the finest wine and attire
[Eric]
When I come around you'll know me by the machines I command
I am an inventor, weaker minds perish by finely manicured hands

[Cameron]
Once flourishing towns left barren, wreaking havoc with the tools of my trade
Unstoppable technological force, death ray devastating blackpowder and blade
[Gang vocal]
I AM AN INVENTOR!
I AM AN INVENTOR! I AM AN INVENTOR!

[Geoff]
I’ve made the blueprints to your destruction, my armies wait for my instruction
Mankind will meet it’s perfection in the flames of insurrection
[Curtis]
Through Science! I have brought hell to this earth
I will kill and destroy it for all that it's worth
Inventing death machines with moral reckless abandon
Engineer of death and of famine

[Eric]
When I come around you'll know me by the machines I command
I am an inventor, weaker minds perish by finely manicured hands
[Geoff]
Your end will come at the foot of my machines
Designed to wipe this entire planet clean
[Gang vocal]
I AM AN INVENTOR!
I AM AN INVENTOR! I AM AN INVENTOR!

[Ben]
Inventing machines with moral reckless abandon
Engineer of death and of famine

Ben's oughta be a power metal bit to cap off the track.

K... where doth they go?


Label the parts thusly: Contractor ripoff riff
Weird riff with lots of backward triplets
CHUG CHUG CHUG
Contractor ripoff riff


I think you get the point.